TK's Bio

[TK]

Player Info
Name: TK
Contact Info: Personal message is the best way to contact me
How you heard of Code Titan: Searching the web


Character Info

Name:Tristan "TK" Allworden
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Species: Saiyan/Tamaranian Hybrid
Homeworld: Earth
Affiliation: Hero

Weapons:Weapons include, but not limited to: M9 tranquiliser gun, M1911A1, Stun, Chaff And fragmentation grenades and a knife
(M1911A1 is modified, modifications: feeding ramp polished to a mirror sheen, long type trigger with non-slip grooves, ring hammer, handle is checkered to dig into the hand, reinforced slide, thumb safety extended to make it easier on the hand, magazine well bored out to make it easier to reload in a emergency, magazine catch button cut down to make it harder to knock it accidentally) Winchester 1300M Pump Action Shotgun

Items: Vehicles: Audi Q7 3.0 TDI Quattro, Mitsubishi Lancer Evolution IX, Brabus S V12S Biturbo Roadster, Audi RS4 Saloon, MV Agusta F4 1000 Tamburini, Kamov Ka-60 Kasatka, 1969 Chevrolet Camaro Z28, Porsche 911 Turbo, Pagani Zonda C12S Roadster, Audi R8. Gadgets: Mobile phone, stealth camoflauge

Powers/Abilities: Starbolts, Flight, Super strength, solar flare, Teleportation.

Pets: none

Appearance:
(without the facepaint, the olive drab uniform, and the radio. instead jeans and mitsubishi ralliart top) 6ft 2 in tall, medium build, mullet, got tameranian apperance, saiyan traits is aparrent in the fighting style and in the pride, thats it. Green eyes, (Starfires long lost half brother), Reading Glasses.

Personality: OC... Calm And collected and fun loving, but if threatened will change into dangerous, proud and in some cases, suicidal if need be... has a soft spot for chrissy, and a liking for hot sauce. weaknesses: cockiness... asthma, allergies to metallic chromium, and cat hair...

History: the son of queen luand'r, and king vegeta, he is just a year older then koriand'r. King vegeta came to tamaran, looking for someone to seduce, then he *censored* Luand'r, impregnating her, then fleeing like a coward, and commits suicide, due to pride... then TK was born, altough, because of this, TK dosent like his saiyan side, he chose to live on tamaran with the king and queen, effectively, making him a royal. he fled 6 years ago, and studied to become a mechanic here on earth. he then started a apprenticeship with a mechanic, and when he got enough money to build and set up a shop/house, he did, and he also has another form of income, where he is getting millions of dollars for introducing a few people to a great oppourtunity. he has a tendancy to seize up from time to time, but thats only when he dosent sleep well. he landed in australia, then moved to the us, and re-set up there. he is hardened from living alone, most of his time here on earth.

he met the titans on his move into the U.S, driving along in the audi, all of a sudden, a villain stops me and pulls me out, stabbing me in the stomach, and left for dead, then the titans showed up, fixed up by raven, then i shouted pizza afterwards to thank them

Example of first person RP, and Second Person RP: First person: *whistling* what a nice day... i like the cold weather... *cold breeze* brrrr... too cold, hehe
Second person: *sound of diesel engine with turbocharger screeching away* TK was just minding is own business driving his Audi, when all of a sudden, someone jumps out into the path of the oncoming Audi, tk brings the audi to a halt, winds the window down leans out the window, tapping on the right fender (car is RHD) "hey, do u mind getting out of my way? i have an important meeting to attend to!!!" the villain said: "yes i do mind, i am not getting out of your way until you are dead, half breed tamaranian" then TK repies: "WHA?! how do u know im a half breed? and i wont let u kill me" then TK locks the door, The Villain smashes right side window, and drags my back along the shards of glass "YAH!!!!!!!!!!!" the titans hear that, and come running/flying/driving to my aid, while the bad guy stabs TK in the stomach, 5 times "YAH! YOW! GET LOST!!! AH!! OW!!!" the titans say: get away from him, slade!!! he didn't do anything to you!!!" then starfire notices my facial features and yells out: "we have another tameranian here, he looks to be badly harmed!!!" TK writhes in pain, opens eyes, and says weakly: "hello starfire... i am tk *gasp* im only half tamaranian... i just happen to be your long lost half brother..." and then faints to preserve the little energy he has left. then Starfire yells to the titans: "TITANS! I NEED HELP!!! HE NEEDS URGENT ATTENTION!!!" Robin is the first to arrive, closley followed by raven, cyborg and beast boy Beast boy says: "hey star, he looks like you!! how cool!" cyborg then says: "yeah, bb, i agree, he is like star in the skin colour, eyes, eyebrows and hair color..." starfire responds: "he is my long lost half brother" raven then uses her powers to heal my wounds, and TK wakes up "ugh... i feel like i went through a puree machine..." the group (apart from starfire) asks: "half brother? whats his other half?" Tk then stands up, and goes to his car to inspect the damage, and on hearing that, replys: "im Half tamaranian, Half saiyan" Beast boy replys: "COOL!!" then TK says: "raven, can you use your powers to clear out the glass shards?" then raven takes out the glass shards and puts them into the nearest bin , TK then says: "im going to take this car to get repaired and then im going to fly home to grab the Lan-Evo, and we will go out for pizza, hows that sound?"

pictures: i give german car fans.com credit for the pic of the Q7, all the pics are links. too many to post up as images.

i172.photobucket.com/albums/w25/RalliartFanEvoIX/MV_Agusta_Tamburini_stpz.jpg
i172.photobucket.com/albums/w25/RalliartFanEvoIX/mitsubishi.jpg
i172.photobucket.com/albums/w25/RalliartFanEvoIX/ka60_1.jpg
i172.photobucket.com/albums/w25/RalliartFanEvoIX/Brabus_SV12_S_Biturbo_Roadster_06_1.jpg
i172.photobucket.com/albums/w25/RalliartFanEvoIX/audi-rs4-1.jpg
i172.photobucket.com/albums/w25/RalliartFanEvoIX/2050817.jpg
i172.photobucket.com/albums/w25/RalliartFanEvoIX/1969_chevrolet_camaro_z28.jpg

[FireThorne]

Some things DO need to be changed, TK....

[Teph]

Approved! -^_^-
now for the trial stage, you can roleplay with ravenroxx, and maybe me if I get approved, for the trial stage! -^_^- Now to get my but chewed some more....

[Ravenroxx]

yay..lets Rp together..hurry up and post!

[TK]

Note to admins: my character profile has changed a little... just making sure u know...

[chriss]

sukhoipilot21 said:

Note to admins: my character profile has changed a little... just making sure u know...

I Think your character is going to Rock Tk

[TK]

*blushing* Aw, shucks... thanks sweety!! *kisses chrissy*

Note to all: ive added two vehicles... and pictures, and added a picture to show what my character (rough guideline) will look like

[LO]

Okay, congratulations on editing at least.

However:

Raping the QUEEN (when she's already married no less.) would be grounds for immediate assassination if not all-out war. This breaks both DBZ and TT canon, as King Vegeta is clearly shown to be alive, and the planet under Freeza's rule later on. Were it the case that they had declared war on that planet, I think it's more than conclusive to say Freeza would have annihilated Tameran, which he didn't.

I think if you want some suggestions/tips here instead of just bashing, he'd either have to be in his mid-twenties as the product of an illegitimate relationship between another Saiyan (seriously, I think K.V.'s saiyan pride wouldn't allow him to breed with an alien) and Luand'r before she ascended to the throne, or he'd have to be worked in as a straight-tamerianian middle-child of the king and queen

That'd still work providing he pulled a Blackfire and left early and I haven't seen him pull any saiyan powers/abilities, though you'd probably have to remove the Solar Flare and Teleportation, but I haven't seen him use either of those as it is. Besides, he could still reach the solar flare effect by flashing a starbolt.

[TK]

whatever... its done, so no more jumping down my throat about it...

*THREAD LOCKED!!!*

[LO]

whatever... its done, so no more jumping down my throat about it...

*THREAD LOCKED!!!*

Ah, you edited, but it's still breaking canon in both series. Reread the suggestions I'd posted and try one of them, or if you have an alternative, use that. Either way; please don't brush me off like that and declare it done.


Because if this is done, then I'm sorry but the bio still isn't up to guidelines. Believe me, I'm getting just as tired of this as you are, but this would've been a lot easier if you'd just listened a week ago.

(FYI; locking doesn't affect staff)

[TK]

Grrr....

[LO]

This time however, I'm adding the deadline.

Fix it to fit guidelines by this Friday or I will declare your character bio in violation of the rules and you will not be allowed to RP with him until it is fixed.

~Lord Otaku XXVII
~TTF
~Guildsbounty

Well, that was given back on Tuesday and you did edit before now. Unfortunately as I stated in a response that you yourself did read and is posted here, that bio explanation still isn't up to snuff. I even gave you suggestions which were ignored.

I suppose I'll see you back on the trial board sometime.

[TK]

Im really pissed now... and i tend to get really nasty...