Sekht's Bio

[delvin]

Player info
Name: Delvin
Contact info: PM me, or PM ask for my e-mail. (my main e-mail, so decided not to let everybody knows)
How you heard of codetitan: My friend


Character info
Name: Delvin Sekht
Age: 15 or < or >
Gender: Male
Home world: The time sphere at Forbidden path of time
Affiliation: Happens to be a high school kid, but turns out to be a
Demon, but neutral good.
Personality: Quite quiet but only in some occasions (a big party or disco) he comes to even quiet and creepier, he can be helpful and kind, when meting some problems, he¡¯s smart solving those, he¡¯s smart, whether science or maths, doesn¡¯t angry easily, but if he really have no more patience, he can burst out to a mad person. Even though he¡¯s dark and evil in the inside, he could be a good counselor.

Weapons: Powers, a glowing dagger and a well-refined steel blade (a 4.5" pen knife) that will cut through anything.

Items: A hologram Watch and a silver chain/charm that concerns his identity

Powers: Base on his nature, a Cerberus, he can morph into it, when in a stress or anger mood, he will turn into a Cerberus, with red eye, red fur, ripping teeth. Since his nature is a dog, his sense of smell is very good, have a good stamina and agility. As his mother was a sorceress, he can cast magic, skills and spells. Those including Healing, ice (turn water into ice ) and water (control water) which only can be cast when presense of water, fire(create, control), teleport, and thats all. (*since he can create and control fire, he will not hurt by touching flames)

Weakness: He may have the power of healing, but it takes up to 5 minutes. Poison, curses can be cure in 15 minutes time. This means the speed of healing is slow. He may not see through blur view(mist is around him), but smelling will got to use this time. when he is in his human form, his strength is weak, only when is his fully morphed cerberus has a wonderful strength. In cerberus
form he may have lot of energy, when he has no energy, he turn back to a human again, he may faint, or lead to death. this causes by if he has 160/200 % energy used up, turning back to human, it's 160/150% energy, he's overloaded, the limit is over his human limit. and that's what happens. He may have power to create and control fire, but he is no resistant of smoke(faint breathe in too much smoke, or eye pain) . He cannot see through thick fog and mist. He cannot mix his powers either( fire and water together) , and when in his Cerberus form, he cannot use his other abilities.

Pet: A black-brown owl ¨C Deph
Location: A small house at jump city with his aunt.
Father: Garth Sekht ( a demon wizard)
Mother: Elena Hzarrier ( a sorceress)

Appearance:
Height: 170 cm.
Weight: 55 Kg
Hair: Dark Blue
Eyes: Dark Blue, turn to red when angry or when turning into a Cerberus.
Clothes: a long sleeve black T-shirt, with a black-red hooded jacket outside. A denim cargo, with a running shoe able to speed (run fast), a glove which able him easier to climb wall, and let his pet owl land on his arm. Blue skin with an elf ear. Sharp fangs (or consider as teeth too)

History: Garth Sekht, son of Tharh¡¯ Sekht, a demon and Lira Enrie a demon witch who work as a sorcerer serving Ezhar¡¯ the ruler of World of time, meet a beautiful sorceress, Elena Hzarrier. They immediately fall in love. Elena doesn¡¯t know Garth was a demon, and more, he is evil. The married, then Elena was impregnated by Garth, then only she realized Garth demon nature, so she decided to use a potion to kill herself and the baby together, but when Elena was ready to drink the potion, Garth saw it and throw the potion away. Garth needed that baby to work as his slave, so Garth locks Elena in a chamber.

One night, Elena at last figures out how to escape the chamber. She escaped and teleported to another dimension that Garth can¡¯t reach, the time sphere at the forbidden path of time, and there He was born. Elena gave him a name: Delvin sekht. She realized she live no longer, and she is pity to let the child die, overall he¡¯s her kid, she cancel the idea to kill the child, so she decided to give him somebody. When Elena on the way to the Whirlpool of Time, she was attacked by Garth, although she managed reach earth, but the baby going to die. She hides at a church beside the jump city, that¡¯s where she saw a statue of a Cerberus at the hidden basement of the church. She pleaded someone would able to save Delvin, then the statue of the Cerberus shine brightly, turn into a real Cerberus, and it¡¯s a red fur, red eyed Cerberus. The Cerberus agree to save the kid by merge it¡¯s soul with the kid¡¯s soul, but Elena must replace the Cerberus¡¯s statue job (it¡¯s the gods order in order to guard the entrance of The Whirlpool of Time. If the guardian had to leave, he/she must replace with another person of something else. ) In order to save the kid, Elena agreed the Cerberus¡¯s deal. After the souls merged and Delvin was saved, and Delvin in the merging process, he grew to a 5 year-old kid, laying unconscious on the floor. Elena straight turning into a woman statue, guards The Whirlpool of Time¡¯s entrance. And the baby was left there.

Luckily a short while, a Christian woman found the pathway of the hidden basement and saw the kid. She was pity of that kid and takes him to her house. When Delvin was awake, the woman is beside him, asking what is his name. The kid replied Delvin Sean. Actually is Delvin Sekht but he found is uncommon last name. The woman is Silvia. So Delvin call her Aunt Silvia.

When Delvin was 8, Garth comes to earth, and found Delvin while he walking back from school. Delvin instinct tell him that he¡¯s a bad guy, his father, so he run back to home. Unfortunately, Garth caught him when he hasn¡¯t got a time to escape. Then Garth pushes him down. Delvin¡¯s anger drive him totally mad, without knowing he can do that, his eyes turns red in one blink, his skin sprout out red furs, size increasing amazingly, hands to paws, with claws instead of nails. His head separated to three, then three of the heads bulged out, nose to snout, teeth, or fangs grew sharper and bigger, his vertebrate¡¯s end grew longer and form a tail, but ends with a serpent head, with a deadly venom filled fang. He turns to a huge Cerberus. Delvin use his massive strength, strong muscles, amazing speed and leaped on Garth. Ready to rip his head with his jaws, Garth disappeared in smoke. After that Delvin heard sound of peoples, he wants to change back, and when his mind focused to change back, he slowly shrink back to normal size and back to one head and no tail. Then he hides aside, when the people pass, he slowly comes out, then he run back home as fast as he can. Telling the truth to Aunt Silvia, she realized he is not a normal kid, but still, she take care of Delvin like her own child, full with care and loving.
Although once his Cerberus side make him mad and almost hurt or kill Aunt Silvia.

When he¡¯s 9, he started to discover all of his powers and abilities; he goes to library to learn about magic and spells. He refined a normal 4.5¡± penknife to a strong steel blade that will cut through anything, and then found a Glowing dagger from an abandoned library. He continues his study of science and computer to 15 years old, without being disturbed by his father. Now working as a scientist at a secret lab at the jump city, a chemist.


Example of First person RP, and Third Person RP: Walks out from the backdoor of the lab, it¡¯s a windy night; he¡¯s walking back to his house. There are only a few peoples at the Walter End Street at jump city. Some creepy peoples with a hat and black evening coat staring at Delvin deadly. He ignores them. Walking down the street. Still wondering the case of Jack the Ripper had come here or somehow. Some beggars lying on a corner, only newspaper as blanket. He sighed. Then he heard a high pitch screaming behind him. He turned back. Walks to the source of the sound.

Err¡­ hello¡­.. Anyone there¡­

* He mumbles softly , then saw a shadow past, with a cold wind blew past him *
The killer?

* Then saw a shadow on a floor, an object. A dead body! *

Murderer! Aaaa¡­.

* He wanted to scream, but he can choke out the sound, watching at the dead body, with no intestines and heart, the blood dripping, many blood on the floor, gasped, and then run back to home, as fast as he can*

Better tell Aunt about it¡­.

[LO]

Oh joy..this could take some work.

Powers: Base on his nature, a Cerberus, he can morph into it, when in a stress or anger mood, he will turn into a Cerberus, with red eye, red fur, ripping teeth. Since his nature is a dog, his sense of smell is very good, have a good stamina and agility. As his mother was a sorceress, he can cast magic, skills and spells. Those including Healing, ice, fire, lightning, poison, air, earth, Thunder, Water, Hypnotize, invincible, levitation, teleport and telepathy, speeding also included. (Run incredible fast). His father is a demon, so he have dark powers and magic, (as trigon was a demon, trigon¡¯s powers is also included in his powers) He can also sense things, or see the future only sometimes, and basically, the future he sense are often deadly and bad one. With this ability, he can avoid bad things from happening.

• Morphing into a three-headed dog the size of a small house.
  
• Enhanced senses.
  
• Enhanced agility
  
• Enhanced stamina
  
• Telepathy
  
• Trigon's abilities (so this guy can kill every single person on earth just by appearing? Lose this one entirely.)
  
• Precognition
  
• Totally unspecified "dark powers"
  Magic:
  • Super-speed
    
  • Elemental abilities
    
  • Invincibility (listed under the magic area)
    
  • Levitation
    
  • Teleportation
    
  • Healing
    
  • Hypnosis

Those're the listed powers, and to start right off I see that you have absolutely NO weaknesses at all. Not good.

Put simply; you have WAY too many powers here and they are WAY too vague/unspecific. As it is with everything so scattered here I honestly can't begin to tell you where those areas need work, so I'll suggest this for now:

Find ONE area for your character to specialize in ability-wise and focus there (and please don't just say "Magic" so you can include all of them).

Oh, and give this guy some weaknesses so he's actually balanced?

[delvin]

Edited!!! ;D
i think i had canceled some powers... and add weaknesses, the last weakness i suddenly forgot about it, than i remember it at last.

[LO]

I see very little changed.

You removed the "trigons power" bit, but all you did after that was add stuff such as mind control, cursing, poisoning etc.

Overall; you barely altered anything which is what I'd suggested. To put it into comparison; the guy should have a power balance that can put him on roughly equal footing with the titans. As he is, you've got a guy packing all the powers of Robin, Beast Boy, Raven, Jinx, Hotspot, Aqualad, and a few OC's at the very least.


To add to that; your only weaknesses in reality are "Healing is not instantaneous", "he's blinded in fog/mist", and "He's greatly weakened if he overexerts himself".

That's hardly enough to balance out the list you've run up on powers. Nothing in there is uniquely exploitable and/or truly crippling.

[delvin]

edited!!! err.. i wanted to ask you something: if i haven't been approved in my RPs, can i still post at other places? (at any topic, the green spade... or others. ) this is the place that i not so sure about.

[TTF]

No, you can't. You can post in any topic above this one (Genral Board and such) as long as you don't try to Roleplay out your char. in there. In order to post there, you have to be approved here, and in the trial boards.

[LO]

Okay..finally getting somewhere.

Powers: Base on his nature, a Cerberus, he can morph into it, when in a stress or anger mood, he will turn into a Cerberus, with red eye, red fur, ripping teeth. Since his nature is a dog, his sense of smell is very good, have a good stamina and agility. As his mother was a sorceress, he can cast magic, skills and spells. Those including Healing, ice, fire, lightning, poison, air, earth, Thunder, Water, Hypnotize, invincible, levitation, teleport and telepathy, speeding, and thats all.

Or to list them:

Dogshifting (gains senses, strength, agility, stamina)

Magic, including spells for healing, ice, fire, lightning, poison, air, earth, thunder, water, hypnosis, invincibility, levitation, teleportation, telepathy, and superspeed.

Get rid of invincibility. Not even Trigon or Malchior could assume a totally invincible state.

Telepathy; I'm iffy on. I don't see how that works as a spell, unless it's something that lets him speak to another with his mind for a few seconds.

Hypnosis: needs details here. Is this the watch-waving "you are sleepy!" stuff, is it dependant on both people making eye contact?

Now, try and focus here. If you're going to keep that many abilities (seriously, not even the Ancestor here has control over that many things the way this guy does) he has to be largely mediocre at them. Like say...only maintaing a flamethrower spread or water/ice jet for a few seconds, lightning can only be summoned in absence of sunlight, he can only levitate himself..etc.

In short; you either need to cut out abilities so he only focuses strongly on two, or have his control over the main list being very limited with descriptions/weakness limits on just how far each one can go.


Oh, and I see that the mention on weaknesses looks a tad ignored...

[delvin]

i'd canceled lot of powers. since he'd teleport, speeding is canceled.

Did i left an invincible?

As he can create and control fire, resistant of fire and lava can be accepted?

LO : Oh, and I see that the mention on weaknesses looks a tad ignored...

This means i must put more weaknesses? Anyway, I had add a weakness there.

[LO]

I'm not saying "pile on the weaknesses" here. I'm saying that he has to have an exploitable drawback unique to his power situation.

Your guy gets tired if he overexerts himself. Just about everyone does.

He can't see in thick fog/mist. Just about nobody can.

In short; he's already got the basic stuff that most people would have as it is.

So now:

Pyrokinesis
Hydrokinesis
Teleportation

Transforming into a giant three-headed dog.

Much more focused now...

To round this out; I'd put in something that says he can't use any of his other abilities while in dog form to balance him, and he can't mix them (aka; can't use two powers at once) and then you should be fine.

[delvin]

Edited. I had done everything more in-detail, as you said. Balance up him, add somthing that i had forget to point it out too.